I personally advocate tinkering with the pasted examples like this to get past any software for detecting duplicats (which the FCC recently claimed to use).For example here’s my current rough draft, with notes in commentary that I created using riseagainphoenix’s base. :
I’m writing in reference to Docket # EPA-HQ-ORD-2012-0276. Please prohibit the storage and/or disposal of mine waste in Alaska’s Bristol Bay watershed. The proposed Pebble Mine presents a long-term risk to the sustainability of this important fishery, and all the people and businesses that rely on it. In 2010, Bristol Bay salmon fishermen harvested 29 million sockeye salmon worth $165 million in direct harvest value alone. That represented 31% of the total Alaska salmon harvest value.The Bristol Bay 2017 harvest of all salmon species was 39.8 million fish; ranking second over the last 20 years (1997–2016) and worth a preliminary exvessel value of $214.6 million almost double the 20-year average of $108.9 million and ranks second during that time frame , as reported by the Alaska Department of Fish and Game Division of Commercial Fisheries.
Mines come and go, but leave waste behind from the processing of ore, which under current methods is stored on-site for centuries. Bristol Bay is an earthquake heavy region making it almost certain that storage of tailings (toxic semi-liquid mine waste) will fail. January 24, of last year, Southcentral Alaska experienced a 7.1 magnitude earthquake that cracked roadways. It should be noted that this would be classified as a major earthquak capable of causing serious damage.(Cite earthquake?, talk about extent of fault lines) In Bristol bay, this waste would most likely be Acid Mine Drainage due to oxidation of unearthed pyrite, or “fool’s gold” which is often found in conjunction with valuable metals
Bristol Bay has been called the “Salmon factory of the world”, offers five species of Salmon: King, Sockeye, Chum, Pink and SilverSalmon along with 7 species of fresh water fish: Rainbow Trout, Arctic Char, Arctic Grayling, Dolly Varden, Lake Troutand Northern Pike.Many families rely on wild salmon as a uniquely nutritious source of protein, rich in essential omega-3 fats and vitamin D. Farmed salmon is not nutritionally identical (much lower in vitamin D, much higher in saturated fats and pro-inflammatory omega-6 fats) and poses its own environmental risks. I urge the EPA to take immediate action to use existing provisions of the Clean Water Act to protect this large and irreplaceable wild salmon fishery. The short-term gains of mining projects in the area outweighed by the long term risk to the environment and the economy. Please continue to ensure the well-being of this vital waterway by enforcing the EPA region 10 July 2014 Proposed Determination.”
Sincerely, YOUR NAME AND ADDRESS