Let me give you an example...

I saw this offer the other day.

"I'm really quiet this time of year so I'll do {insert service} for this ridiculously low price"

That offer SCREAMS two things...

1. I'm desperate for business.
2. Beat me down on price!

This is how you present an offer...

Sunshine Coast Business Owners

Time is running out to claim your $1997.00 Bonus where...

I'll start working on your marketing for 2017, whilst you relax and enjoy Xmas :)

To check out this sensational Xmas deal {that disappears Xmas Eve} click here => http://www.isometricmarketing.co/free-mad-marketing-campaign

P.S If you'd like to know more about the current Qld Government Grant that you maybe eligible for where they’ll match what you spend $1 for $1 up to $10,000

Click here to message me => https://m.me/beaniesmarketingtips